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My eyes...they water,
my mouth...it's dry,
my heart....she barely beats.
There's a weakness on me,
one I have never felt before.
I want this to stop,
this weakness,
this pain,
I can feel it in my veins,
it's in every inch of my body.
Nothing is the same anymore,
not ever since he came back.
My eyes...they have become heavy,
my mouth....feels like sand,
my heart....beats slower now,
my mind....has stopped,
my body is so weak no longer can I stand,
collapse.
©2008-2009 ~brandta04
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ya...on an emotional streak so bear with me

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:iconlonelycanary228:
Very evocative.

The elipses (elipsises?) add to the evocative-ness.

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